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He sits up in that empty castle,
Dreaming of her, of the girl he fell in love with.
The last time he saw her
They parted their seperate ways because of society.

"Incomplete and all alone"

It snows down on the town below,
Where his love has lived all her life.
From the moment he laid eyes on her,
To the moment they left, he's loved her.
He never quite understood love,
Until he met her.

"If he weren't up there now....."

He loves her dearly, and she loves the snow.
He makes it snow just for her.
Each snowflake is sent with love
For his darling from his heart.

The snow falls, softly,
Kissing the grass and trees.
Laying lazily on the pavement.
He's her snow angel atop the mountain,
Sifting the snow through his hands,
Down to her little town.

"....it wouldn't be snowing."

--JustAnEmptySoul (aka. Dana)
©2005-2009 ~Scissorhands-
:iconscissorhands-:

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:icontink-kiki:
This is beautifully written! You have a real talent for writing. I love how this piece came together..keep it up!
:icondisturbedangel4:
That's beautiful! I love the imagry you used w/ the snow!

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~Cold as ice, twice as deadly, & //\\//Sane
:iconflamegodess2003:
i love the why you write. i feel as if him feeling all of his pain. you are a great writer. im going to watch you. and fav this.

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Only the will of the strong. Will change the test of time.

when life gives you lemons make lemonade. If that does not work squirt lemon juice into random peoples eyes. ~Tom
:iconcolleenlupe:
beautifully written!
i love it!
so edward!

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